|
|
|
"old dog"
Group: Administrators
Last Login: 2 days ago @ 4:04 PM
Posts: 646,
Visits: 4,053
|
|
|
|
|
|
Newbie
Group: PB Employees
Last Login: Friday, June 12, 2009 9:11 PM
Posts: 20,
Visits: 462
|
|
I really like the composition and the mood. I think the water should have some sharper crests here and there. Also, some dirt/weathering on the windmills and structure would add quite a bit to it. I have had great success with the vray dirt texture in diffuse. I use a pretty high contrast fractal noise in the radius and crank up the samples it really helps to add some grunge in the nooks and crannies. Sweet render!
Randy Burton
...........................................................................................
Design Visualization Specialist
Project Visualization Technical Resource Center
P: 303-390-5902
F: 303-390-5934
burtonr@pbworld.com
www.pbprojectviz.com
|
|
|
|
|
"old dog"
Group: Administrators
Last Login: 2 days ago @ 4:04 PM
Posts: 646,
Visits: 4,053
|
|
|
|
|
|
Wookie Wrangler
Group: Administrators
Last Login: Wednesday, September 28, 2011 1:53 PM
Posts: 206,
Visits: 1,416
|
|
It doesn't feel wet! splashes and some water drops on the camera should help. and the waves need that white foam/bubbles where smaller waves have fallen.
Also a bigger motion blur on the blades, they don't have that moving feel.
and I would put a very small random rotation on all those instances, they all seem to be pointing in the EXACT same direction, in reality they wouldn't be, they would turn to the best position automatically. just a touch, not something you would notice but would help sell it better.
__________________________________
Christopher J. Leone
Parsons Brinckerhoff
75 Arlington Street, Suite 9
Boston, Massachusetts 02116
|
|
|
|
|
Newbie
Group: Forum Members
Last Login: Monday, June 07, 2010 3:36 PM
Posts: 21,
Visits: 71
|
|
Ahoy mate....., very great job, the entire scene is so dramatic....I agree with all of the comments, more dirt, add seagulls add wet splashes.
Rich WardParsons Brinkerhoff, Denver
Design Visualization Specialist
|
|
|
|
|
Newbie
Group: Forum Members
Last Login: Monday, October 03, 2011 4:58 PM
Posts: 18,
Visits: 63
|
|
Could also play with the perspective a bit since you're riding low and going for the drama shot. And dude, add Schmelkie floating by on a wave! Looks great.
The Cajun Modeler!
|
|
|
|
|
"old dog"
Group: Administrators
Last Login: 2 days ago @ 4:04 PM
Posts: 646,
Visits: 4,053
|
|
|
|
|
|
"old dog"
Group: Administrators
Last Login: 2 days ago @ 4:04 PM
Posts: 646,
Visits: 4,053
|
|
|
|
|
|
Junior Member
Group: PB Employees
Last Login: Thursday, January 14, 2010 8:14 AM
Posts: 35,
Visits: 73
|
|
| looks awesome, but i think you could probably lose the seagulls, they are just a distraction imo. Nice picture tho, and love the mood, although im not sure if the blades would be lit up like that with the sky the way they are. perhaps overlaying some kind of reddish light on the blades to show the moody sky a bit more
Stuart Shortland
PB Taunton
UK
|
|
|
|
|
"old dog"
Group: Administrators
Last Login: 2 days ago @ 4:04 PM
Posts: 646,
Visits: 4,053
|
|
|
|
|
