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Posted Wednesday, March 07, 2007 2:06 AM


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Hi guys! I'm one of the newbies here and just want to share some of my works done here in PB singapore..

The image is taken from the drop off point of a community center, I'm not sure about the effects and entourage

because it's a bit rush for competition. Hope you'll like it. Comments and suggestions are most welcome. Thanks

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Posted Wednesday, March 07, 2007 12:00 PM


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Looks good but the thing that catches my eye is the lack of shadows under the mercedes on the right. I also think there should be more shadows from the people, but other then that I think it looks good.

P.s - the "Need a second pair of eyes" is probably the best place to be asking this.

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Luke Cottle
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Parsons Brinckerhoff Australia Pty Limited
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Posted Wednesday, March 07, 2007 2:34 PM


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Nice work!  I would echo Luke's comments about the shadows, but it may have been a request of the client (as you know, some clients don't like shadows for whatever reason).  Also, compositionally speaking, the blurred car in the lower left corner is drawing a bit too much attention to that area.

BTW, the vegitation is amazing!  What plug-ing/asset/resource you using for that?

Glen Loyd

Lead Design Visualization Specialist  | Parsons Brinckerhoff
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Posted Wednesday, March 07, 2007 2:39 PM


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Sorry I meant to say that the reason I suggested the shadows on the car was because I could see a shadow from the palm and it seemed to make the car sit out too much.

But like glen said, awesome work on the planting - looks great!

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Posted Thursday, March 08, 2007 2:54 AM


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thanks for the comments guys!

I really forgot to  put all the shadows last time, especially for the mercedes and humans on the main drop off area..I will have to ensure next time to avoid this things as it was also meant for competition.

All the entourage and vegetation are done in ps..I have also an aerial view of the project, maybe I can also share to you guys soon. Thanks again

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Posted Tuesday, April 17, 2007 2:56 PM


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I agree it looks great, but the car on the right just looks like it's floating. like the other guys I think if you just added shadows it would help the image out just a bit.

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